Manuals, Tutorials, and More

Home > Revision Assistant > Revision Assistant Curriculum Resources > Exemplar Essays

Exemplar Essays

The Revision Assistant team has created Exemplar Essays for the most popular prompts in the system. These sample essays can help teachers gain further insight into how Revision Assistant is assessing student work.  Also feel free to visit our 25 Ways to Use Exemplar Essays for a series of fun, hands-on writing analysis activities to implement in the classroom today!

Click the prompt titles listed below to see examples of Emerging (1), Developing (2), Proficient (3), and Advanced (4) essays for each prompt.



America Singing

Grades 7-8 | Analysis | Text-Dependent


Angela's Ashes

Grades 9-12 | Analysis | Text-Dependent


Bag Tax

Grades 9-10 | Argumentative

Big Data

Grades 9-12  | Analysis | Text-Dependent ​​​​​


Call or Text

Grades 9-10 | Informative


Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives

Grade 7 | Informative | Text-Dependent 


Prep Work

Grades 11-12 | Argumentative

A Proclamation About Rosa Parks

Grade 6 | Informative | Text-Dependent


The Open Window

Grade 8 | Informative | Text-Dependent


You must to post a comment.
Last modified
16:09, 19 May 2017


This page has no custom tags.


(not set)