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Exemplar Essays

The Revision Assistant team has created Exemplar Essays for the most popular prompts in the system. These sample essays can help teachers gain further insight into how Revision Assistant is assessing student work.  Also feel free to visit our 25 Ways to Use Exemplar Essays for a series of fun, hands-on writing analysis activities to implement in the classroom today!

Click the prompt titles listed below to see examples of Emerging (1), Developing (2), Proficient (3), and Advanced (4) essays for each prompt.







America Singing

Grades 7-8 | Analysis | Source-Based


Angela's Ashes

Grades 9-12 | Analysis | Source-Based


Ad Me

Grades 11-12 | Informative


Big Data

Grades 9-12  | Analysis | Source-Based


Dulce Et Decorum Est

Grades 6-8 | Analysis | Source-Based






Bag Tax

Grades 9-10 | Argumentative


Is It Art?

Grade 6 | Argumentative | Source-Based


Naps: Healthy or Not?

Grades 7-8 | Argumentative | Source-Based

Prep Work

Grades 11-12 | Argumentative


School Sports

Grades 7-8 | Argumentative | Source-Based


Trophies for Everyone

Grades 9-10 | Argumentative | Source-Based





Call or Text

Grades 9-10 | Informative


Home: The Blueprints of Our Lives

Grade 7 | Informative | Source-Based


A Proclamation About Rosa Parks

Grade 6 | Informative | Source-Based


The Open Window

Grade 8 | Informative | Source-Based





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